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Apples,
Red and Delicious.
When received from a snake,  doesn't that sound suspicious?
The forbidden fruit that granted humans, knowledge
But if thats the case.  why do i still have to go to college?
But did anyone stop to notice, Adam and Eve are the first two humans
Doesn't that make us all related?, I'm atheist.  I'm just assuming.
Brothers and sisters killing each other?, now that is just confusing.
I don't know, that's just me rambling.
But that story, is forever Maddening.
was looking at my avatar, decided to write about the little thing that kid is holding. Not my best of work. but i wanted to write something

c'mon i'm bored out of my mind
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been featured in mu journal!

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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Like like like :)
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Tiachu Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
L sama :D And nice poem; quite thought provoking ^^
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ZxChipxZ Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kute drawing, nice poem. the kid looks like he hasn't been able to sleep lolol
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liebedero Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. I'm impressed this is fantastic.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks. This has been around for a while though. Like back in February, you should check out my latest poem. I would love to hear you opinion on it. It's a spoken word piece that I plan on performing soon.
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liebedero Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
okay. I kida deleate most of my watch item. I have to many and they become hindrance. But I try and check up on you every once in a while. I plug for you under my Dev ID.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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liebedero Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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NinJa-CRow Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
L so cute ^ ^
I am poor at English, but your writing is interesting.
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