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Apples,
Red and Delicious.
When received from a snake,  doesn't that sound suspicious?
The forbidden fruit that granted humans, knowledge
But if thats the case.  why do i still have to go to college?
But did anyone stop to notice, Adam and Eve are the first two humans
Doesn't that make us all related?, I'm atheist.  I'm just assuming.
Brothers and sisters killing each other?, now that is just confusing.
I don't know, that's just me rambling.
But that story, is forever Maddening.
was looking at my avatar, decided to write about the little thing that kid is holding. Not my best of work. but i wanted to write something

c'mon i'm bored out of my mind
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been featured in mu journal!

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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Like like like :)
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Tiachu Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
L sama :D And nice poem; quite thought provoking ^^
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ZxChipxZ Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kute drawing, nice poem. the kid looks like he hasn't been able to sleep lolol
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liebedero Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. I'm impressed this is fantastic.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks. This has been around for a while though. Like back in February, you should check out my latest poem. I would love to hear you opinion on it. It's a spoken word piece that I plan on performing soon.
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liebedero Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
okay. I kida deleate most of my watch item. I have to many and they become hindrance. But I try and check up on you every once in a while. I plug for you under my Dev ID.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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liebedero Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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NinJa-CRow Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
L so cute ^ ^
I am poor at English, but your writing is interesting.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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LRyukluvrLighthater1 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
the poem is cool. your avatar is adorable ^-^ L rules
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's been a month or two when i wrote this. Im glad people still like it. I appreciate the comment. Thank you :D
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LRyukluvrLighthater1 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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legendsofzeldafreako Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
"that kid" in your avatar, by the way, is L from the anime Death Note.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I know. lol, I've watched the full series?
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legendsofzeldafreako Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh okay. I kind of figured that you wouldn't have him as your avatar if you didn't know but the way you referred to him it sounded like you didn't know.

Sorry about that xP
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's cool. Im kind of vague when i refer to things. Which leads to alot of confusion.

I loved the series. It's like my favorite anime of all time :D
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legendsofzeldafreako Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's one of my favourites, too, after Fullmetal Alchemist and Soul Eater.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Two more great anime :D

Ever watched Kino's Journey. It's more philosophical than anything but i still love it.
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legendsofzeldafreako Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No but I'll check it out!
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's also called "Kini No Tabi: The Beautiful World"

I absolutely loved it. I'd say it's an anime for poets and thinkers in a way. I don't know how to describe it
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lildevil1301 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
L :iconomgsocuteplz: i love him sooo badly
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too :D
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lildevil1301 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsmileyplz:
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beardsmakesmehappy Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011
This is good:D
btw the kid is L from Deathnote, in chibi form :D
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oh I know who L is. XD
I was just referring to him in a weird way. But thanks. Glad you liked it.
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Melonie546 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
isnt the kid L??? and awesome poem
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yea it is, XD
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Melonie546 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol u forgot his name so u called him kid ur so forgetful
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
actually no i didn't
i said kid, cuz he was actually a kid.
I don't have to be specific. lol
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Melonie546 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:P
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neurotype Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: the grammar needs some work, but it's an entertaining concept.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah, the grammer looks fine XD
lol thanks for the comment
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Erin-Flight Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Great poem, interesting piece. At this moment I am watching death note and it was out of curiosity that I clicked on this piece. I was pleasantly surprised to find something else. The problem is an interesting one and if you do want an answer some christians look at Adam and Eve as a parable.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks,
i was really bored when i wrote this.
Did not expect all the attention it has recently gotten. The first 24 hours my in-box was exploding because of this poem.
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Erin-Flight Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Really? Funny how sometimes the things you care the least about or spend the least effort on get the most attention.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It is, XD
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Erin-Flight Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
For your sake I hope you haven't recieved hate because you said you were an atheist. Some people are extreme.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Surprisingly no i have not. Nothing but positive comments and a crap load of favs. I was expecting some religious
person to get the wrong idea, and confront me or something. But nothing like that so far
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Erin-Flight Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
That is good. I am religious myself but I still love this piece. Maybe the annoying people will stay away?
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, maybe or maybe not.
I'm not at all that worried.
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LadyIndigo2 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
That's an adorable picture of L. :D
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I realized alot of my recent viewers are Death Note Fans XD
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LadyIndigo2 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
Haha! Well of course! That icon is just too adorable!
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, It'll probably be my avatar for quite a few years.
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LadyIndigo2 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
Yeyah!
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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meikyuu123 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
:9 I'm Meikyuu by the way. Nice to meet you.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well i'm Known by many names, but on deviant i"m alfredo XD.
Thanks for the +Watch
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