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Melancholy

How a single touch

Can reap souls

As the Melody

Begins to subside

Watching Mind & Body divide

The agony, accustomed to my eyes

Wishing to become happy again

As I turned into an empty shell

Treating the living dead

Is a waste of medicine
Sadness... It can kill
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rememberxixlovexyou Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It sounds like it would be in a metal song. Each note is shredded and growled to loudly that it doesn't have to rhyme and you don't even really understand, but you just... feel it.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks I guess. XD
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rememberxixlovexyou Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Pleasure.
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SomnambulantRiparian Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sadness can't just kill, my darling.
It can also create.

Very beautiful, by the by.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So very true. and thank you. I appreciate it :)
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Melonie546 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I LIKE IT! :)
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks XD.
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Melonie546 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
urrrr welcome XD
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You never really comment on my work. lol,or not that often though >.>
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i think it's well written =D
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